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    Let me know what you think please? http://www.jaysonlinereviews.com

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    Nice header. I would add some more to it or make your white text larger so it takes up more of the area. It looks kind of bare since your tagline is one side and the picture on the other.

    The white text on the gray background is a little hard to read.

    Also, the tabs at the top are a little confusing. Many of them are not even about web hosting. I'm not sure I would combine fitness information on a hosting review website.

    Finally, I had to scroll just to start reading your text. I'm not sure I like the banner centered at the top of your text. It may look better if you align it to the right within your text flow.
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    Lisa thanks but its not a webhosting review website that's just one part of it jaysonlinereviews.com its a review website, mosly i concentrate on teaching people affiliate marketing thats my main focus. Thanks for your tips i will take them into consideration i appreciate it
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    Hi jayorban!

    I LOVE your color scheme! It's very contemporary and I think it works for your targeted market. I agree with lisa - I'd make the text in your header bigger and maybe in the same green as your background so it pops more?

    If it was my website, here are the things I'd change:

    1. The tabs on the top and bottom of the page. On the top I think it takes away from your overall flow and looks really out of place, and they aren't related links? Hmm.

    2. I'd change *Loser* to "*Last Place*" so it doesn't come across like you're trying to trash anybody.

    3. You're like me... a capital letter junkie.:P I'd make your sentences flow better in your reviews by minimizing this, and make sure your grammer is correct. One that really stood out... your got there and their mixed up. (I'm awful at spelling too... I type everything up in word, proof read it backwards and spell check it there before putting it into the site builder. It's a little intensive but it works for me.)

    4. I LOVED the checklist that you did for hostgator! Can you do that for all the webhosting companies to help explain why you did what you did? Also if you could add more content as far as more companies to review would be great, but you have a lot to start with.

    Your concept is great from my point of view!! Thanks for sharing and I hope my ideas help.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jayorban View Post
    Lisa thanks but its not a webhosting review website that's just one part of it jaysonlinereviews.com its a review website, mosly i concentrate on teaching people affiliate marketing thats my main focus. Thanks for your tips i will take them into consideration i appreciate it
    Oh OK, well now that you've explained that I would definitely recommend focusing your content more. It is going to be much harder to get your individual reviews ranked for certain keywords if you have a ton of different review subjects.

    Think about how people surf the web. They surf for "hosting reviews" or "mp3 player reviews". Now look at the sites that come up in Google for example. They are rarely sites that offer reviews on multiple topics. The search engines tend to rank sites that focus on that one subject so if you have a ton of different reviews it sort of dilutes your content. So if your main focus is affiliate marketing, it wasn't obvious when I went to the site.
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