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Old 07-10-2009, 09:43 PM
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I just made my FIRST eBook site it's called http://ultimatetrafficebook.com

I can't change the design so tell me how you like it anyways..

Feedback please!

Go easy on me it;s my first eBook site
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Old 07-11-2009, 04:51 AM
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Default Great Squeeze Page!

Had a look at your site and I don’t really mean to sound picky but most would prefer to call it a squeeze page.

In any case it’s a great looking squeeze page and that’s coming from someone that doesn’t particularly like squeeze pages. (I’m not a big fan of hype).

Just the same I appreciate that squeeze pages do work and I’m sure yours will as well.
The only critique I have for you is the header is a little hard to discern, ‘there’s a lot happening up there’ and there is a major typo you may want to get on top off.

Typo’s on squeeze pages spell instant death as there generally not so much content on them so a typo stands out all that much more.

Also a squeeze page’s primary purpose is to sell, and with a major typo I don’t think your traffic will take you as seriously as you would like.

Other than that a great squeeze page!
I particularly like your affiliate program with E –Junkie, a recipe for good revenue.

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Old 07-11-2009, 08:22 AM
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Thanks a lot. I'm going to go ahead and fix that. Thanks for the 411
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Looks good..the only things I noticed that could use a fix were theat some of your text bleeds into the outside borders of the box.

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I just made my FIRST eBook site it's called http://ultimatetrafficebook.com

I can't change the design so tell me how you like it anyways..

Feedback please!

Go easy on me it;s my first eBook site
I think you should, put this on a long sales copy.
It would really help you visitors enjoy an relate you who you are,
what your product is, what are the benefits of the e-book. etc
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