Blog-Review

Rammuny · #1 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 08:02 AM

If not minded, could y'all check out my blog http://www.robswebtips.com/blog

Tell me what ya think? Anything you would like to see differently? Or any suggestions?

Feedback is welcome!

anakha6 · #2 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 08:33 AM

In the title,'how can this benefit you' is a question, put a question mark after it.

I also have a few issues with the grammar etc

1. 'Because, your readers already taken the time to subscribe so worry about them first' - this should read 'Because, your readers have already taken the time to subscribe so worry about them first'

2. 'Doing simple things such as taking some simple time to send a personal email to each and everyone of your readers' -In this context, everyone should be two words - every one.

3. 'Remember… This 15 minutes can make a tremendous difference..' The first ellipsis is not necessary, and the second only has 2 dots. This should read 'Remember, this 15 minutes can make a tremendous difference...'

Personally, I feel that the advertising is a bit excessive, you would probably do better all round with 1 or 2 ads. Also in the 'Interview with Lisa Irby from 2createawebsite.com' bit, the text is touching her picture, this looks unproffessional and makes it hard to read, there should be a gap here.

I hope this helps.

Rammuny · #3 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 09:36 AM

Yes thanks a lot, this helps tremendously.

anakha6 · #4 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 10:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rammuny

Yes thanks a lot, this helps tremendously.

Glad to hear it.

ladylou · #5 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 11:24 AM

Hi There!

I really like the layout and template of your blog - it looks very professional! If it was my website, here are the things I would change:

1. Your words and advertisements are coming out of the gray box you gave them. It makes it harder to read and I personally would be much less likely to click anything on it.

2. "4: You have been in contact with top name companies such as Bob parsons" - Parsons should be in caps.

I am a horrific speller, so I write everything I want to put on the site in Word so it can spellcheck it for me. This certianly doesn't get me out of having to proof-read it a couple of times at least, but it certianly helps! (By the way, I'm not saying you're a bad speller. I just noticed that the person who posted above also found some spelling and grammatical errors, so I thought I would share a tip that might help you as much as it has helped me!

)

All The Best,

LadyLou

Sighter · #6 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 01:37 PM

You got a amazing template on your hands, and I found all the articles you have interesting and informative, and personally I cant find anything big I would like to change about it as from my stand point the website looks great.

The only thing I can suggest you do is to fill some of the untapped area you have on the gray bar.

I'm interested in guest writing on your blog so i'm going to contact you via. the "contact us" on your blog to clear some things up.

Hope to hear from you soon!

missme · #7 (**permalink**) 06-15-2009, 02:19 PM

Your blog is awesome. Nice layout and colors. I love it. I would only make sure the spacing between your questions and answers are the same. It looks great! Also.. Are you going to change the site to the same template as the blog?

MISSME

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