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Old 10-31-2007, 05:37 PM
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Could I please get some advice or light review on my site, critique me give to me straight. I know the theme doesn't match yet but believe me it will i have all the content ready for about 65 % of the site especially the tube section but I've been in need of a bit of professional and SBIer's opinions.

A bit frustrating building such a site with only simple html and no css but I'm working.

Must navigate through the site, please do not let the hompage fool you, I know its flat.

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Old 11-01-2007, 06:38 AM
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Hi Revenue,

I found it difficult to review your site without a home page - I'm not sure what your overall theme is.

I know you said your home page is not finished, but are you planning on keeping the date & time gadget there? I think it's too big and a waste of space.

On your "tube money" page, all of your links on this page go to the same Tier 3 page, but only the "websites" link makes sense to me because, when you click on the word "websites", it takes you to a list of websites. However, why does the "get paid" link take me to the same place? If I click on a link that says "get paid", I want to be taken to some content that talks about just that-getting paid.

On your "games" page, I think you should move your content to the top so that visitors can have something to read as soon as the page opens. That way, they will know how and why this page is a part of your site. When I first opened it, I didn't understand what this page had to do with anything.

Same thing with the "game videos" page. You have content here, but I don't know what this has to do with your overall theme. And that's because I don't know what the theme is.

I think you should take time to work on your home page. Even if the home page was all you had up, if your visitors stumble upon it and like what they read, they will probably want to re-visit your site in the future to see what else you've added.

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i have all the content ready for about 65 % of the site
Then you should have more than enough content to complete your home page.
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Old 11-01-2007, 02:37 PM
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Ok i agree, the theme will be there shortly though, def not considering keeping the date and time thingy there. On my tube money section what u said is true and i never even looked at it like that you're right.

Checked out your site again and in my opinion its a must that you work on your adsense positioning and the units you're using, Check out this vid

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9dxiVqrM-Ms
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Old 11-01-2007, 03:23 PM
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Well there's not much there yet but what I see looks good. I really like the clock. Adds a nice touch.

On your tables with the YouTube videos on the psp.html page I would make your right column a bit wider so your text line width is not so small. Sort of makes the text look strange.

Maybe decreasing the size of the YouTube video and/or narrowing the size of the left column will help.
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Old 11-01-2007, 03:27 PM
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I felt the same way, but i ended up building it that way anyhow, because i plan on having adsense right beside that right column.
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Hi again,

Thanks for the video link. I just watched the first one - very informative.
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