hello Richie,
I really
like the design but I only comment on two things, why did you through all your
text to the right side wasting all that space?
and as you are promoting a service
you should show the benefits right away like different packages and comparing them.
One more thing you should watch out for, I get the feeling that you started this project and was excited with it, then
you got bored so you didn't finish it as strong as you started, I can see that in the formatting of the text.
I hope you are not bothered with what I say, but I'm trying to give you an honest review.