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Old 09-26-2008, 09:44 PM
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Default Review This Please And Let Me Know What Yall Think

I know this is under "site review" but i have no site, but i do want you guy's honest opinion about this email introduction letter that i wrote today. At least it was suppose to be an introduction but yall will see what i'm talking about... i did not put the website link at the bottom cause i'm afraid to get hit by Lisa. LOl


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Welcome to Capital J Beatz!


Thank you for registering for Capital J Beatz Online. Moments ago you requested more information about my beatz or you wanted to learn how to sell more beats.

Well here is what you are going to get and learn from me:

*A SAMPLE OF EVERY NEW BEAT THAT I RELEASE
*INFORMATION THAT I HAVE LEARNED OVER THE YEARS THAT WORKS
*THE DO'S AND DONT'S FOR SELLING ONLINE
*WEDSITES THAT YOU MUST USE TO GET MONEY
*HOW TO GET TARGETED TRAFFIC TO TO YOUR SITE FOR FREE
*SPECIAL DEALS THAT I HAVE GOING ON AND SO MUCH MORE..

Just to let you know, i am not a proffessional Writer,or some kind of webmaster so if you are looking for errors in my writing you will find plenty of them because i am a beat maker. I put most of my time and my efforts torwards making beats and then selling them. I could have easilly copied somebody else's writing and paste it on here then edited it like i wrote it,but i wanted to come straight forward to you right from my heart. So basicly what i'm saying is if i can do this then you can too. EVEN IF YOU DONT HAVE ANY BEATS OF YOUR OWN.

I just wanted to let you know a few things about myself so you can understand who i am and what i stand for. I am NOT the type of person that is going to give you false information. I'm Not the type that is going to lie to you. Everything that you will read in these messages, i have done and know that they work. A lot of the things i have learned was on my own but in order to really make it you have to have a mentor! THIS IS THE KEY TO SUCCESS. Just think about it for a second...If you was trying to become a Basketball Player and you never even tried playing before how would you even know how to teach yourself? But you go ahead and try it anyway and over a period of time you learn how to play the game, but lets take a look how you could have got taught much better and faster.

Say "Mark" seen the lakers game last night and said to himself "Man i want to be like Kobe Bryant" so the next mourning he goes down to the park and he see one of his buddies and he ask's Mark "What are you doing here? You dont play basketball". And Mark says i know but i seen the Lakers game last night and i really want to learn how to play Basketball and you ARE THE BEST BASKETBALL PLAYER THAT I KNOW,WILL YOU TEACH ME?

Now This is the way that i would have done it and i'm about to tell you why. By Mark having a teacher that knows all about Basketball, his teacher will more likely teach him better than he could have ever taught himself. His Teacher probably would have said something like "Okay Mark,today we are going to run laps" Mark would not understand it but he would have done it because he wants to play like his friend. Now lets talk about where most people will start. I bet you 9 out 10 people who dont know anything about Basketball would have started out shooting the ball. BUT WHAT'S THE POINT OF LEARNING TO SHOOT THE BALL IF YOU NOT IN SHAPE ENOUGH TO RUN UP AND DOWN THE COURT? Why do you think teams have coaches for?

Ok that conclude today's lesson,think about that for a minute but while you think about it check out some beat's that i have for lease for $5 at
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Last edited by Capital J; 09-26-2008 at 10:12 PM.
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