I'm back again. I've been working on some of the suggestions you have all given me. Please take a look and give me your suggestions/advice.

http://www.funeral-planning-guide.com/index.html

Thanks,

Bruce

Hey Bruce...it's getting there... One thing though, is that you use a majority of the same images over again...the military burial page still makes me think that you should have an image of Arlington cemetery rather than the painful image of grief...but that's just me. also there are some issues the choice of affiliate merchant...for example, on the Funeral Insurance page there is an ad for Ever Cleanse...a nice product I'm sure, but not relevant at all for the page or the theme of the site...

Also, I'm not diggin' the color scheme...I would be using more earth tones and calming colors rather than the harsh white and sky blue header. And your Spanish page goes to a totally different site all together which would be very confusing to me if I was a surfer.

That being said, there is a lot of great information on here and I don't doubt that you will definitely have a winner on your hands...

Take care and all the best.

ps: Good to hear that you are a Jazz fan...

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Hi Bruce

You're off to a good start.

I'm not sure if this was done on purpose but the shareasale banner on this page http://www.funeral-planning-guide.com/espanol.html looks a bit out of place. I think it's because there is so little content. If you're going to use a banner here, a horizontal one would look better.

Also, maybe because I know they are ads but there seems to be a bit of "ad overkill" on some of your pages. This page in particular http://www.funeral-planning-guide.co...te-burial.html You've got two rows of AdSense ads and then a ShareASale text ad below it. There's almost more ads than content. I do think the search engines look at this so you might want to work on adding more meat to your pages if you're going to use so many ads.

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Thank you all for your input! I will fine tune my site.

Regards,


Bruce

Simple design. But the theme is not seems to be related to funeral site. If you can use a theme to highlight the site content it would be great.

Hi Bruce. Just wondering if you received my PM to you? Let me know and take care.

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Just one thing from me. Watch your typos. At times you seem to forget to use a space after a sentence.Like this. No biggie though. I could still read it.

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