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Old 05-07-2008, 12:32 PM
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(I wasns’t sure where to put this … as it's part review & part recommendations)

Hi ___ Please review my site & make recommendations.

If any of you have been to Victoria B,C. Canada & found a restaurant, attraction or place to stay particularly good please do go to my website & add it to the short but growing list of recommendations.

The idea is that any travelers to Victoria will know some of the best places to go (especially if they have a limited time or budget) ..

Also any photographs or videos that any of you think will help please send them to me.

Places to stay- recommendations
http://www.victoria-bc-canada-guide....endations.html

Attraction - recommendations
http://www.victoria-bc-canada-guide....endations.html

Restaurant - recommendations
http://www.victoria-bc-canada-guide....endations.html




Thank you very much Craig_____(the best place to do this is on the “contact us”
page on my website OR you could ask me for
my email – I cant put It on here as most forums
don’t allow it).
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Old 05-08-2008, 10:50 PM
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Your site is nice and clean, a good heading and some links on the left to follow. It sounds like your target audience is people visiting Victoria, British Columbia or who are relatively new to it.

I like your layout. On your home page, I would suggest on your home page that you get right into the nitty gritty of what is unique in Victoria with targeted bullet points, maybe with a picture next to each one, kind of like a 'highlight list', for example:

* Victoria has these famous restaurants, a, b, and c, which offer the finest shrimp the world has ever seen.

* Victoria has the wonderful festival of lights, check it out because of a, b, and c.

* There are these wonderful places to visit, a, b, c

* These beds and breakfasts are very personable and great to stay at (list them here)

* and more

Then have specific topic pages on these restaurants, sites to see, etc... and say why they are so great with good pictures.

I would spoon feed your audience as much as possible, even including addresses and a link to google maps where available, which requires some technical knowledge, but not too much.

Anyways, I do like your site and you have a good knowledge of your topic so I have no doubt that you will do well and capture a growing interest.
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