sammy,
Overall it looks good. Here are some comments, though:
1. Can you use text links in place some of the banners? Banners imply that you're intentionally promoting those products... while I know that's exactly what you're doing, you want your Squidoo page to be viewed as a review, not just simply promoting different offers.
2. You could probably provide more in-depth views... think from the perspective of your lens reader. They are probably asking themselves how much will I make per-click, what is the difference between the different ones, should I join one or all of them, etc. Think of the questions that your target audience would want to be answered.
3. Obviously you know that there are a ton of other ways to make money online, why did you pick those in particular? In answering this question, consider specifically who your target audience is, and why they would pick those offers instead of creating a website and utilizing affiliate marketing? Is it someone who is too busy to create a website, so they would spend time clicking on ads, filling out surveys, etc? Think about the needs and the hot buttons of your target audience, and try to address some of those needs in your lens overall and in your reviews.
4. The make money online market is incredibly competitive, so it's important to define/carve out a specific niche you're targeting. Because it's very saturated, I typically stay away from it... but this doesn't mean that you can't make money in it.
I may have more comments in the morning
Let me know if you have comments or questions about anything I have mentioned so far.
Sherif
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