Hello all,

I am new to website babble and I recently created a site. Please let me know what you think. Any feedback would be very helpful. Thanks!

Hi Lynell and welcome!

I think your site is very well put together. I like the overall look, and you have a lot of good info.

A couple things I did notice - on your "winning tips" page, you have an ezine sign up at the top of the page, but I didn't know what the signup was for at first site. I think you should introduce your ezine first, and tell your visitors what they'll be getting from you once they sign up.

Also, on your "latest news" page, I clicked on it expecting to find a list of updates to your site. But it reads more like lots of different topics that do not flow well together. Try adding the date that you added that info to each topic. For example: "diabetes: weight is a factor - Added 1/4/08", or something like that.

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I love your site, and you've put some video in there fantastic! I've just been reading through your different sections and there great very useful content, you've also done a great job with ads similar colours etc.

At first i thought oh another weight loss site, but you've actually picked a specific topic inside that big subject which is great, and that's what people need to do if they specialise in something they need to narrow it down.

I think you could put a profile picture or even a comments section such as guest book you might get some really nice comments, and then you could use them in your content. So for example like a box saying "the other day i got an email from bla bla " what a great site, changed my life" i was truly amazed or something like that. I think that would improve your sites integrity and build your users trust which is a great thing to have.

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You have a nice layout, easy to read and navigate.

I like the fact that you have incorporated videos into the site, it adds that extra oomph.

As West mentioned, I would definitely add a date to the latest news page for each update. This will incorporate a flow to the page.

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