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    please take a look at my new blog about love
    http://yourlovetips91.blogspot.com
    let me know what else should i do to my blog
    so that i can get some money thru the blog
    thank you

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    Just had a look at your blog,

    Is the name of the blog suppose to be Your Love Tips as with the address? because you missed off the R in the title if so, at the moment it has You Love Tips.

    Also I had some trouble with reading the main text, found I had to strain my eye's to read it (btw I wear glasses), so might be good to wait to see if anyone else has had the same trouble with making out the text but you might need to make some minor changes to either the colour of the text or the colour of the background.
    Maybe a little change to the title and header text colours too as they were very hard to make out from the header image you have used, which I liked btw did you design it yourself?.

    Good & fun idea for a blog though.
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    ohh yeah
    thanks for that
    i changed it already
    thanks so much k

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    The header evokes more fear than a feeling of love. It's kind of scary looking. The colors are very distracting. The grammar could also use some attention.

    Try using a better contrast between your background color and text color. It is a little hard to read.

    Hope I wasn't too harsh. It is a good idea though.

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    i am having problem with my grammar
    is it too bad?
    are you having problem with your spouse? want to have a girlfriend?want to be loved?
    check out my blog
    http://yourlovetips91.blogspot.com

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    Quote Originally Posted by farhan91 View Post
    ohh yeah
    thanks for that
    i changed it already
    thanks so much k
    Quote Originally Posted by farhan91 View Post
    i am having problem with my grammar
    is it too bad?
    No problem I just spotted the R missing at a second glance.

    I am not too good with grammar either and I tend to make silly spelling mistakes to so I use this http://www.spellchecker.net/spellcheck/
    to check most of the stuff I write now it checks spelling, grammar and offers replacements to wrong ones.
    Got to check all of my website with it though still cos I haven't that yet.
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    actually im using it too
    it help me a lil bit
    but its not really convincing me
    are you having problem with your spouse? want to have a girlfriend?want to be loved?
    check out my blog
    http://yourlovetips91.blogspot.com

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    It is definitely a strain on the eyes. The purple and yellow or gold isn't mashing together too well. I couldn't read anything because it was just overwhelming for me. I would strongly suggest you change the colors up.
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    i have changed it
    how is it looks like now?
    thanks for your advice
    i do appreciate it
    thank you so much
    is there any mistake that need to be changed?
    are you having problem with your spouse? want to have a girlfriend?want to be loved?
    check out my blog
    http://yourlovetips91.blogspot.com

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    Looks a lot better. But in order for me to see it I had to click on the link at the top. If i click on the link in your signature it takes me to some biblical page I am confused.
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    The header background is kind of scary & It is hard to read the title.

    Everything else is good Keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by farhan91 View Post
    i have changed it
    how is it looks like now?
    thanks for your advice
    i do appreciate it
    thank you so much
    is there any mistake that need to be changed?

    I just clicked the link in your sig and it came up with church college or something :S

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    the color of your blog templates suits to your title of your blog.

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    thank you so much for thise comments
    hehehe
    any more comment?
    are you having problem with your spouse? want to have a girlfriend?want to be loved?
    check out my blog
    http://yourlovetips91.blogspot.com

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