Hello

I am trying to make up advertisements to advertise SBI.

I was wondering, what the average persons opinion is of the ad below ?

Or should I just advertise one website at a time (is that too much information to give a person all at once ?)

All of your suggestions/ideas would be very welcome.


Thanks Craig


This is the add.


The ULTIMATE work at home company /web host & more
I have been looking for a really genuine way of working from home for more than 10 years.

I tried out many companies but none worked until I discovered SBI (Site build it).

I researched it in many different ways – (BBB online, search engines, forums & and I made a few phone calls to real people) - which finally convinced me to try it as they have a 100% refundable guarantee.

Everything was above board !

If you want to experience the same or better success than I have had please take a look at these web sites
(there are 40 or more websites that you could look at depending on the reason(s) you have for starting a website or business - these are just a few of them)

The SiteSell Homepage
The best overall introduction to Site Build It! - SiteSell's home page.
http://www.sitesell.com

SBI! Home Page (buildit)
The complete site about SBI! What the “it” means in Site Build It!,
http://buildit.sitesell.com

If you are looking to Work From Home
Just about everyone's dream is a job that they can do at home. No commute, no bosses, and a chance to work in your 'jamees. Well maybe not. This page emotionally connects with anyone looking for a new life and new possibilities... moms, retirees, people with health problems, and anyone looking for a job they can do from home. SBI! has the power to deliver on this dream.
http://workfromhome.sitesell.com

For Retirees/Pre-Retirees
Let your audience know that retirement can mean freedom, enjoyment and extra income.
http://retire.sitesell.com/SCOBAHCAN.html

For WAHMs, "Work At Home Moms"
WAHMs choose not to take paid work outside the home, so that their family can be their first priority. Show this growing audience how SBI! provides the flexibility, income generation and personal fulfillment they are seeking.
http://wahm.sitesell.com/SCOBAHCAN.html


Thank you for your time Craig

Craig,

The ads are OK but if you want my opinion, the best way to sell SBI! is to have success with it yourself and to get in front of a large audience who needs it. That's been my key to success right there. It's not easy to get strangers to fork over $300 so you have to show them that the product does indeed work for you.

May I ask, where are you going to place these ads? On a website? And if so, in what context? And does it fit with the site's theme? It's hard to really evaluate the ads if we don't know the audience and where they will be placed.

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