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Old 07-22-2009, 07:50 PM
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Probably not what you are looking for here, but nevertheless where you need to start. Your sales page looks really good (exceptional graphics, etc.), but you do need to check your grammar/spelling and make some fixes. If not you will lose credibility with people before they even get started.

Your very first sentence: "It is uncommon for people to spend thousands of dollars monthly using cheap traffic techniques...." You mean to say, "It is NOT uncommon...." or "It IS common...." At least it should be saying that to make sense in the context.

Only four sentences later you write, "Spend all there time marketing there site but receive no valuable traffic...." Twice in this sentence you have "there" instead of "their."

I didn't read carefully after that, but you should and I know you will. Unfortunately, I can't help you a lot with the main point of your question.

One thought though. I held the view that I might prefer selling an ebook, too, until watching Lisa's latest. Now I am beginning to think the best thing is to give it away. She does that and invites others to give it away also! But inside she has affiliate links that have a great potential for her. If you have some good/effective affiliates that starts to sound like a great idea. This, then gives you a way to promote it.
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