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Old 07-30-2008, 02:09 PM
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Default Great Site!

Great site, Mark! Great idea, too. I actually thought of doing the same thing except my bright idea was to pass out flyers. I like the website much better!

I think your site looks very professional and I love the pictures.

A couple things that came to my mind:

1. A typo on one of the first paragraphs that starts with:"Feel free to look around this site. And when your (should be you're) ready to ..."

2. On the home page in the first couple paragraphs, I'd bold some of the words to make them stand out more and draw in the visitors eye. For example, I will help you turn your things into money...

There's a lot of text right now so it's nice to bold the important stuff to help the reader summarzie the information quickly.

3. Also on the home page, I would summarize how you can help someone sell their items. For example, I will help you determine a good price, take pictures, communicate with buyers, etc.

4. The My Fees and My Policies pages have a long spiral notebook image that you have to scroll through before getting to the content.

I think it's a great site!
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