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Old 06-29-2008, 02:17 PM
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Question Please critique my detox recipe site

Hi

I have finally written a detox recipe eBook.

My sales page is online but order buttons not working until I get Clickbank
approval.

http://www.thedetoxspecialist.com/De...cipe_book.html

I have a couple of alternative benefit driven headlines that I could use in place of the current one.

I know I have to test them but it would be great to get some feedback first.

Here are the alternative headlines.

"Former deli owner and foodie reveals a new collection of tasty and easy to prepare recipes that will detox & cleanse your body of energy zapping toxins without going hungry, boring your taste buds or growing trays of wheatgrass."

"Discover an amazing collection of easy to cook but tasty recipes that will detox and cleanse your body of energy zapping toxins without starving yourself, living on raw or monotonous bland foods or spending hours in your kitchen."

http://www.thedetoxspecialist.com/De...cipe_book.htmlhttp://www.thedetoxspecialist.com/De...cipe_book.html

What do you think?

Sandy
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