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Old 05-21-2008, 02:17 PM
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Default Making a pitch to sell them on my service!

Hello All!

I've got some really great news for my Hold em site. Today, after much negotiation and talk with one of the premier poker sites in the industry, they placed my site in their poker site directory with a PR5. Their directory is about 10+ pages deep with 20 sites listed on each page. After bargaining they placed me on the first page of their directory at position #6. I know for a fact this site gets over 53,000 hits a month.

Here is my plea for help. They allowed me to place 2 links within their directory so I pointed one of the links to my poker coaching page (I did it on purpose). Now I want to market my service and make a hard pitch or sell to enlist prospects for our service. Can and will someone look at my Poker Coach page and help me with some wording or re-phrasing? What am I lacking that should be there? How can I make a better presentation?

Thanks for your advice in advance.
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