Hi bestfin1,
Honestly, my first thought is "waaaaay too many ads." I have no idea what you're trying to tell me other than try to get me to either click on a google ad or buy from one of the ebay auctions below.
First impressions are huge and if people suspect you're just trying to make a sale they will run quickly. Give them some useful information upfront. Tell them why your ipod/iphone site is different from the others.
Maybe it's just that you haven't added any content yet but I sure hope you plan to tone down the ads a bit.
Also when I typed in
http://www.iphoneipods.com, it directed me to that page, not
http://www.bestfinecomputers.com/iphoneipods as you stated.