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Old 04-19-2008, 11:58 AM
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You do have a lot of great content and information.

The site is very professional looking, but kind of impersonal. When I know a site is not built by a large corporation, I like to know a little more about the writer. I had to go out to your blog to find your profile.

I love the heading you created on the newsletter page (5 power points of poker).

I am not an expert and not completely sure what to look for yet when looking at other sites so it is difficult for me to give a really valuable review yet. That being said, the home page as more of a sales pitchy feel to it, to me. I was looking for the ebook download at the end. Maybe changing the font or adding some pictures might add a little warmth...then again, maybe it is fine...this is just my own impression.

I did notice a couple of typos you might want to fix...on the Betting Strategies page there is a place where Texas needs to be capitalized. Also, on the Contact Us page some code came through in one of the paragraphs. Oh...and you flip back and forth from Us and We to Me and I...I think the Me and I are fine to use...again, giving a little more personalization to the site...but at any rate, you should probably pick one way to go and stick with it throughout the site.
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