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Old 04-14-2008, 09:11 PM
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Very nice, clean layout. Great spacing. I have 2 points. Is "dosing" or "dose" one of your keywords? It seems to be repeated a lot in the 2nd paragraph.

Also, your April 7th post is in a different font than the others. These are fairly petty things though as everything looks very nicely done. I especially like your header image. Very appealing to the eye. Great job!

Maybe you could ping your posts for more traffic or like others have already said - keep article marketing.
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