Looks like a standard one page sales ad without all the needed info.
Does your product include a script to run a site?
Does image hosting make money by selling the image hosting itself, or ads on your image hosting site?
Hosting?
And I would not make it a selling point that the ebook is only 12 pages long, people like to get a lot for what they pay, 12 pages can't be a whole lot.
The design for the most part is fine but you need to work on the content.
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