Craig,
The ads are OK but if you want my opinion, the best way to sell SBI! is to have success with it yourself and to get in front of a large audience who needs it. That's been my key to success right there. It's not easy to get strangers to fork over $300 so you have to show them that the product does indeed work for you.
May I ask, where are you going to place these ads? On a website? And if so, in what context? And does it fit with the site's theme? It's hard to really evaluate the ads if we don't know the audience and where they will be placed.
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